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[TobiKeymaster]

Nice job! Particularly like the 2nd verse.

Timing of the lyrics is a little off in places....

I've added the intro bars and some Mins / Secs - should clarify how they're intended to work with the music.

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**LYRICS**
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Intro

2 bars
2 bars (My lyrics start at the same time as Bruno's originals / After 16 secs)

Verse 1

Do you know what it feels like, when you can't get up?...........................(2 Bars)
Do you know what it feels like, when you've had enough?..........................(2 Bars)
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When you fall , to the floor , and your knees (just) break,......................(2 Bars)
With the weight, of it all, (and) there's no escape,.............................(2 Bars)

Instrumental Break starts after 12 bars / 48 secs
**Instrumental Break**..................................................................(2 Bars)
**Instrumental Break**..................................................................(2 Bars)
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Pre Chorus 1 Pre Chorus Starts after 16 Bars / 1 min 04 secs

In darkness, when it's hopeless, (and) you need a light,.........................(2 Bars)
To guide you, to hold onto, to make you fight,...................................(2 Bars)

Chorus 1

Your voice is my light (And) it's all I need.....................................(2 Bars)
(And) I'll fight For as long As you sing to me...................................(2 Bars)

Verse 2

Do you know what it feels like, when you lift me up?.............................(2 Bars)
Do you know what it feels like, when I feel your love?...........................(2 Bars)
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(And) if you fall, from it all, I won't let you break,...........................(2 Bars)
From the users, (and) the fakers, I'll keep you safe,............................(2 Bars)

Instrumental Break starts after 32 bars / 2 mins 08 secs
**Instrumental Break**..................................................................(2 Bars)
**Instrumental Break**..................................................................(2 Bars)
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Pre Chorus 2 Starts 36 bars / 2 min 24 secs

In darkness, when it's hopeless, (and) you need a light,.........................(2 Bars)
To guide you, to hold onto, to make you fight,...................................(2 Bars)

Chorus 2

Your voice is my light (And) it's all I need.....................................(2 Bars)
(And) I'll fight For as long As you sing.........................................(2 Bars)
...to me!........................................................................(2 Bars)
(sing to me!)...................................................................(2 Bars)

Chorus 3

Your voice is my light (And) it's all I need.....................................(2 Bars)
(And) I'll fight For as long As you sing to me...................................(2 Bars)

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• This reply was modified 7 years ago by Tobi.