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  • #24697
    Tim Morris
    Participant

      Hi, Skorst, thats not a bad take !

      I reckon you got more confident as it went on as it does better as it progresses 😉

      Im going to try and get my pal to try it out, this is how he sounds on a quick Ed Sheeran cover we did one night

      Bruno - let us know what you think, shall I give it a go?

      https://soundcloud.com/spark240/lego-house-remix

      #24701
      Tobi
      Keymaster

        Nice job! Particularly like the 2nd verse.

        Timing of the lyrics is a little off in places....

        I've added the intro bars and some Mins / Secs - should clarify how they're intended to work with the music.

        ----------------------------------------------------
        **LYRICS**
        ----------------------------------------------------

        Intro

        2 bars
        2 bars (My lyrics start at the same time as Bruno's originals / After 16 secs)

        Verse 1

        Do you know what it feels like, when you can't get up?...........................(2 Bars)
        Do you know what it feels like, when you've had enough?..........................(2 Bars)
        ---
        When you fall , to the floor , and your knees (just) break,......................(2 Bars)
        With the weight, of it all, (and) there's no escape,.............................(2 Bars)

        Instrumental Break starts after 12 bars / 48 secs
        **Instrumental Break**..................................................................
        (2 Bars)
        **Instrumental Break**..................................................................(2 Bars)
        --------

        Pre Chorus 1 Pre Chorus Starts after 16 Bars / 1 min 04 secs

        In darkness, when it's hopeless, (and) you need a light,.........................(2 Bars)
        To guide you, to hold onto, to make you fight,...................................(2 Bars)

        Chorus 1

        Your voice is my light (And) it's all I need.....................................(2 Bars)
        (And) I'll fight For as long As you sing to me...................................(2 Bars)

        Verse 2

        Do you know what it feels like, when you lift me up?.............................(2 Bars)
        Do you know what it feels like, when I feel your love?...........................(2 Bars)
        ---
        (And) if you fall, from it all, I won't let you break,...........................(2 Bars)
        From the users, (and) the fakers, I'll keep you safe,............................(2 Bars)

        Instrumental Break starts after 32 bars / 2 mins 08 secs
        **Instrumental Break**..................................................................
        (2 Bars)
        **Instrumental Break**..................................................................(2 Bars)
        ---------

        Pre Chorus 2 Starts 36 bars / 2 min 24 secs

        In darkness, when it's hopeless, (and) you need a light,.........................(2 Bars)
        To guide you, to hold onto, to make you fight,...................................(2 Bars)

        Chorus 2

        Your voice is my light (And) it's all I need.....................................(2 Bars)
        (And) I'll fight For as long As you sing.........................................(2 Bars)
        ...to me!........................................................................(2 Bars)
        (sing to me!)...................................................................(2 Bars)

        Chorus 3

        Your voice is my light (And) it's all I need.....................................(2 Bars)
        (And) I'll fight For as long As you sing to me...................................(2 Bars)

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        • This reply was modified 7 years ago by Tobi.
        #24705
        Bruno Koziel
        Participant

          Sorry guys for the late response, I've been really tied up with work and with kids sports!!

          Thanks Steve for your take on the song. I agree with Tobi on the timing in some spots. It did get a little better towards the second half of the song.

          Great job on the lyrics Tobi! I'm going to try and sing along with the lyrics, we might need to tweak a couple of words to flow a little better.

          Thanks for your hard work!

          #24706
          Bruno Koziel
          Participant

            Spark, I really like this song. Really dig this guys voice. I would really like to hear his take on it.

            #24718
            Tobi
            Keymaster

              Oh thank god Bruno! ...I thought I might have to sing it 😉

              Agree - one or two lyrics don't quite flow right - I shall have a go at tweaking them a bit.

              #24727
              Tim Morris
              Participant

                @Bruno...Ok, Ill see what we can do...

                #24732
                Tobi
                Keymaster

                  I think it's just the in between words 'and' 'just' etc that can be tweaked to make the lyrics sit well. The broad strokes run well for me.

                  #25551
                  Tobi
                  Keymaster

                    Just checking in... where are we with this track?

                    #25654
                    Bruno Koziel
                    Participant

                      Tobi, I've been swamped with work lately. The progress is going but slow. I've been working on the song today and will keep you posted. Thanks.

                      #25665
                      Tobi
                      Keymaster

                        Let me know if I can be of any help. 🙂

                        #29015
                        Sam Spaiser
                        Participant

                          Was this song ever completed? I listened to the demo Bruno posted in March and there are some great ideas here! Very creative and passionate!

                          #29017
                          Patrick Gregory
                          Participant

                            Hey Patrick Dune Here.. Hope your doing well.

                            Just joined this forum and listen to your song.

                            Please give me a call if you would like to discuss your song I think it has some potential.

                            Peace and Faith.

                            Patrick
                            DuneTunes Recording
                            720-345-8452
                            [email protected]

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