Like the warm tone and the guitars in particular sound really nice.

    Some of the additions work for me, some don't. The mix gets a little cluttered in the final chorus / outro.

    I get the direction you're going in, but I don't think you've quite got there yet. Your other mixes have blown me away with their creatively and out and out originality.

    Buuuuut , that's just me, other people may well love it 🙂