Hi Qutie,
Welcome to the academy. The overall balance of the track is nearly there but the main thing I notice is the main vocal is out of time with the track. I don't know if this was intentional but this can sometimes happen if you accidentally move the vocal stem when editing I am guilty of this myself a few times or if the processing on the track has caused a delay that hasn't been compensated for. It is just down to getting the right transition between verse and chorus. Kick could have bit more clarity and punch to it and also the bass, snare could come up a bit more and the electric guitars also. A bit of dessing on the vocals and more body. Work on those for now and repost but overall it's not a bad mix for a first attempt at it
Qutie Ashu.
Qutie Ashu
Stephen Andreucetti