Reply To: Review My Lyrics - "Remember"

[Paul MotionParticipant]

Hi Rasitha, firstly I have to say I'm impressed by your bravery to post these lyrics as they obviously tell a story of heart ache and personal emotional pain. Props for being so open.
I'm not sure I would feel comfortable making suggestions on changes to words which express so much to be honest. Regarding your questions; is it okay for today... if the lyrics reflect how you felt at the time then I don't think it matters whether they suit today's music market or not. If you speak from the heart with genuine intent and honesty, that's all that matters.

Sorry I couldn't be of more help.

Paul