Hi Arthur, I'm with Paul in that the  low end sounds pretty big for me too.

    I also agree with Jon, that the chorus vocals (where the vox split left and right), could come up a bit, just to match the verse level or just a little more.

    I like what you've done with the synth , really nice.

    And those drums !  ;0)

    Overall, I like the different direction you took the song  ;0)