I like it. The ambient sound-scape is perfect. I would try to get the finger squeaks on the acoustic under control, if that can be done. Have not heard the original but whatever you added or took away left a nice blend.
I like it, sounds really clean and detailed on my desktop speakers. Have to check it out on real speakers/headphones. One suggestion, pull the vocal reverb back in the verse to bring the singer in a little closer to the listener, then push it out to where you had it in the chorus.