First off, thanks for your valuable feedback on my version. So of course I should return the favor 🙂
This is a really solid mix. The added "knock-knocks" are brilliant 🙂
One thing I think I notice is that the bass sounds very wide, which to me sounds a bit disconcerting on headphones. It's the original sound of course, but I found that collapsing the low end of this bass sound to mono really helps making the low end more solid and punchy. I could be wrong of course 🙂
The thing that Magnus remarked also kind of stood out to me.
But I suppose they are just minor things in an otherwise really solid mix and a fun listen! The vocals sound really good, and good job on taming the esses there 🙂