Hey Tim,
Great job! Personal mixes have the chance to be reviewed about roughly once a month. Normal FF is for mulitrack mixes/remixes from the academy.
When a members personal mixes FF is on it will be in the same place as normal FF in the forum, so just keep an eye out.
Having said all that I think you've done a solid job with this mix.
Couple of small things to try maybe would be a small notch out at 100hz on kick, it's slightly fighting with bass but not much.
And an idea I had maybe to make the drums have a bit more energy? Perhaps a more roomy rock sounding kit.
There's really not much wrong with this to be honest, just some suggestions to try.
Cheers!
Chris Ibbetson.
Tim Temple
Chris Ibbetson