Paul Motion

    Awesome start Kip! Toms are killer tones. There’s some fizziness going on at the top end of the hats and cymbals that’s a bit piercing for me. I’d love more stereo on the toms generally.
    Vocal is a little hollow for me which makes it feel like it’s set a bit to far back in the mix.
    I’m missing the bass as well.. either too quiet or not enough low end on it.

    Hope that helps.. excited to get onto this challenge!