Hey David, Congrats on presenting your first mix here in the academy. I really enjoyed this mix. Your guitar tone is on point. I think and these are just a suggestion, I would bring down the bass a little when the vocals come in on the first verse. It seems to mutter them a little. Lastly I think everything is so at the same volume in parts it has a tendency to get a little muddy. Or everything is to squashed in the master, it may just need more room to breath. That is if you master it. Again these are just suggestions. BTW the ending was great! As well as the vocals.