Todd Mitchell

    @Peter, some great attack on those toms!  Slam!  You might opt to dial that back once the vocals are in?

    Great use of the full sound stage.  Vocals seem dialed in nicely - maybe a shade more air than I would have used in the verses, but probably just personal preference.  Your lead seems to be mixed in perfectly.

    As with other mixes, I think not bringing up the extra percussion in the break between the 1st chorus and second verse is a bit of a missed opportunity.  You've got some ear candy - give it to the listener?

    Only other thing is I don't know that the kick translates on small speakers.  You might consider just a little more point to make sure a mobile phone would reproduce something implying the kick.

    Great job!  Best of luck in the competition!