Thanks a lot for the feedback Todd.
I agree on the guitars, although I think it's a bit lower down they build up, at least to my ear. It should have gotten a low mid clean up overall, never got around to that. 🙂
The vocal was a decision, I like what the mids gave the vocal and the track. To me it gave it character and it is also the main "atmosphere" element in the track. thinning it removed the "warmth".
I on the other hand love how the snare sits. Different tastes and all that. 🙂 The "snare" is supposed to be more of something undefined percussive than a snare, it's actually just white noise. The kicks are supposed to be heart beat-ish. I do have an audible kick on my laptop speakers still.
It's all moot though, submitted a week ago, otherwise I would have fiddled it to bits by now. 🙂
(I sort of have continued to change stuff to experiment, tuned the vocals, changed the chorus arrangement a bit, but won't upload that until after the comp.)