Really like it when it kicks in at 16 secs. Strings are nice under intro - love that you drop them out just before the mix kicks in.

    The middle 1.17 - 1.56 wanders a little, takes energy away from the remix. I get what you're trying to do, not sure it works yet.

    Loooove the little break at 1.56 - such a nice touch! And the build that follows rocks!

    Really great work. Just that middle bit. Feels... fuzzy. But otherwise, fantastic remix you're building there!