Percussion sounds nice on this. Lows could so with a little tidy - but nice 'grounded' texture to them.
Like the build out from the center. Gives the track a nice feeling of growing. The balance left to right is nice with an interesting sense of depth across the mix as elements are placed in fore and background.
The approach of mono to stereo in the chorus - gives that great lift into the chorus. I think you are sacrificing width in places to do it. It feels a little biased towards ensuring the choruses arrive - if that makes sense?
V. cool work! I'd perhaps want a little more width in places, but I get the approach. Very solid work indeed.