Mark Holden

    Hello Lisa

    Like what you've done with the Vocals great spacing/separation between the harmony parts and main vocal, works well. The Staccato Guitar part for my taste needs a little something adding to give it a bit of a lift, but that is personal taste. The Delay at the end, for me stops too abruptly more of a gradual fade out would smooth things out or start the fade earlier in the track.

    The levels all seem fine to me (I'm on headphones). The cymbals I found once we stripped the song back are not needed as intensely in this more relaxed version of the song. This is what I'm working on myself, definitely want some gentle cymbals maybe ride with a few gentle crashes as the song builds just with not as many hits.

    Had your song on repeat while typing and really liking it.