Arthur Labus

    Hey Mark !
    Great 1st draft man !
    You have already everything on board i would say. Good production choices.
    I would suggest to "move" the voice more upfront, mainly with less "room" on it.
    On the other side the guitar could be less "in the face" and with a bit of reverb or delay.
    Bass could be less dominant and boomy. I high passed really high on my mix.
    Great stuff Mark. Just details man !