Todd Mitchell

    Christian - great job! I like your mix better than mine I think!

    A couple suggestions.

    - I'd probably automate the lead guitar volume a bit more - bring it down further during the verses. I'd also use something to move it back
    - I think you could bring a bit more point to the kick and a little more snare. The genre might not need it, but I think it could help translate. There's also a lot of long boom on the kick during the bridge - which might be clouding the low end during the rest of the song.
    - a touch of distortion on the bass guitar to bring it up?

    I think you've got a real shot here!