Wow! I really like the 8ths pulse in the bass at the start. Great touch. Cool bass sound in general too, you've kept it cleanish which I think works pretty good and I like the tone you've brought out.

    Maybe the verse and pre-chorus/chorus could have a touch more contrast?

    Your snare seems to smash its world to bits. Great effect 😀

    I think I prefer a more effected vocal but that is just taste and it sounds good like this too.

    Great work!