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The good - you wrote a song !...recorded it and posted it, that in itself is a great start.
The Critique ( and Im no expert)....the opening 4 bars didn't grab me, and its too long.
The Piano is to " programmed" not very natural at all, and the sound is a little light.
As mentioned, try and thin the vocals out a bit, let some musical melody in.
Just my opinion after a first listen.
Keep at it !