Hey Arthur, Sorry.... once again I've been rubbish at replying.

    I don't think there's anything wrong with anything you're doing specifically.

    With your previous mixes, it felt like you turned the song inside out and upside down, brought it back from another dimension and flipped it on the reverse side, before crafting a beautiful, unique mix that showed me the song in a new way.

    With this mix, it feels like you haven't quite found your own 'vibe' with the song. ....buuuut, I wrote the lyrics, so I'm not a good judge. It's always gonna come back to the words, more than the music with this one for me.

    Like you, I can't be objective. I would wait to see what other people say.