So I gave it another listen and first of all I think it needs a lyrical / vocal idea to start with. From there we can build the arrangement.

    At the moment, I thunk the A part with the arpeggios is repeated to often until the hook hits the first time. At least the way I hear the song. So John and Dan, if you have ideas for vocals, you could maybe lay down a verse and a hook? 🙂 I am terrible at singing so no hope there, unfortunately 😀