Like the guitar tones... lot's of lovely delays.

    Nice panning bits... Like the selection of vocal parts too - makes for interesting listening.

    The build after the break is really well done, works very well. Like all the placement in the stereo - lots for the ear to pick out.

    Ending is cool with the quick pan at the very end - very cool!

    Great stuff! Little things... kick maybe a bit 'dead', steam sound effects a little 'hot' ;-). ...dynamics a touch uneven in places... buuut nothing to serious for any mix, let alone a rough mix - really very well done and very far along for a first pass. Crackling good mix!