@Kip, I really like your updated mix, the only thing for me was... the toms a little poking out as Paul said.

    @Jon, I agree with Kip, really nice and clean, I miss a little variation in energy between sections, that's about all.

    This has been a fun challenge, and I've learned that my ears need lots of training, and that this free bundle is usable in the right hands (not mine LoL).